Fri 10 Jul 2009
Reviewed by William F. Deeck: ROBERT EDMOND ALTER – Carny Kill.
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William F. Deeck
ROBERT EDMOND ALTER – Carny Kill. Gold Medal d1611, paperback original; 1st printing, 1966. Reprints: Black Lizard/Creative Arts, pb, May 1986; Vintage/Black Lizard, trade pb, March 1993.
Let me state at the beginning that a novel of this type is not my customary reading of choice. Still, I was glad I read it. Alter has presented an absorbing setting and an engrossing albeit not wholly admirable main character.
Leslie M. Thaxton, who prefers to be called Thax, seeks employment at Neverland in Florida, a borrowing of the Disneyland idea. This was, of course, before the construction of Disney World. One of the attractions is an old-fashioned carnival, and Thaxton, who has been a barker and prestidigitator, fits right in at the shell-game stand.
Unfortunately, the owner of Neverland has married Thaxton’s former wife, a beautiful but unpleasant woman with a “cold, sensual, calculating look” who is a former knife thrower and has used Thax as an unwitting target. Even more unfortunately, the morning after Thaxton’s arrival his new boss is found among the alligators where the Swamp Ride is located, with one of his wife’s knives in his back.
Thaxton is a suspect, along with his former wife. The evidence that she did it is so overwhelming that it is obvious that she didn’t do it. Luckily for her, a policeman with imagination is in charge and recognizes a frame-up.
As pointed out previously, Thaxton is a most interesting character, with both depths and shallows. Well-read in the earlier adventure-type literature — particularly Robert Louis Stevenson — and intelligent, he also has a considerable chip on his shoulder and, whether the author intended it or not, is obviously a loser.
He’s something of a philosopher, too, yet cannot see the parallel between his observations, “She smiled at both of us — a real earthy we-know-what-god-put-it-there-for-don’t-we-boys smile. She was about as tarty as they come,” and “I like bed. I like the female form. I damn well like the lust of female flesh — in bed, out of bed, anywhere.”
Fawcett Gold Medal published this novel in those more innocent days when the “f” word was still being blanked out — presumably Black Lizard restores the missing letters — and the sex is suggested rather than explicit.
(I will spare you my lecture as to how a useful word like “f—ing” has been so abused both orally and in print that it has become ,merely a weak and undefinable intensifier like “very.”)
If you can accept Thaxton’s double standard, and even if you can’t, you should find this gripping reading.
Editorial Comment. Following an article by Peter Enfantino on the primary M*F website, entitled “The AHMM Stories of Robert Edmond Alter,” is a nearly complete bibliography for the author. Follow the link, and tell the man behind the door that Steve sent you.
July 10th, 2009 at 10:46 pm
I first encountered Robert Edmond Alter in, of all things, an anthology of stories especially printed for the Marriott hotel chain. The better hotels used to provide these along with the towels, complimentary soaps, and ever present Gideon Bibles. They were usually a mix of humor, articles, and quite a bit of fiction, nice thick little collection in a trade paperback format.
I’m not sure of the origin of the story. Not AHMM I’m pretty sure, but I do recall the story, about an archeologists discovery in the Middle East — a nice twist with a real kick involving a certain famous block of salt. The next one I read was an original novel from Pyramid, Red Fathom, and by then Alter was one of those personal discoveries we all make and proselytize about.
Ironically I “discovered” him about the time he died in 1966.
Joe Gores anthologized one of his shorts in a collection of stories from the pulp and later men’s mag Adventure, though I recall the story and not the title.
His Thieves Like Us (not to be confused with the Edward Anderson Depression era novel) set in Egypt was a good read too.
I know quite a few readers who collect mysteries with carnival backgrounds, and Carny Kill is one of the better ones.