Thu 27 Apr 2017
A HARD CASE CRIME Mystery Review: LESTER DENT – Honey in His Mouth.
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LESTER DENT – Honey in His Mouth. Hard Case Crime #60, paperback original; 1st printing, October 2009. Cover by Ron Lesser.
I am sure that every review of this book is going to start the same way, so why should I be any different? Lester Dent, as far as he is going to be remembered, will be known primarily as the author of all but 20 of the 181 Doc Savage novels published in the pulp magazine of the same title in the 1930s and 40s. Unfortunately for Dent, only one of those stories were published under his own name. All of the others were as by Kenneth Robeson.
When Dent died in 1959, only 54 years old, he was attempting to shift over into writing hardcover mysteries, with only a small amount of success. This particular effort, I am told, was written in 1956 but was never published. What I have been unable to learn so far is why, or more precisely, why not.
It’s a tough, hard-boiled novel that I would say that most of the companies publishing tough, hard-boiled novels in 1956 would have accepted. If not Gold Medal, then there were quite a few others that (in my opinion) should have welcomed the chance to print this.
Walter Harsh, the leading character, is a tough one to sympathize with, though. He’s a small-time grifter, basically ignorant but far from stupid, making a few bucks here and there by selling people photographs of themselves through a bit of flim-flam and fancy talking. As the story opens, he’s being chased by a guy in another car who loaned him $712 worth of photo supplies on credit, money Harsh doesn’t have and can’t give back.
Speeding through the Missouri countryside at high speeds is not a great idea. After the crash, Harsh has one badly smashed arm, the one hanging out the window, and the other guy is dead, crushed under his car as it flipped over him a couple of times.
Recuperating in a hospital bed, with only his comely lady assistant Vera Sue at his side, Harsh is wondering about his future when the story really begins. Although it takes him a while before he catches on, Harsh is recruited to be a stand-in for a South American dictator whom he closely resemblances, down to the same rare blood type.
Apparently a revolution in the dictator’s country is in the works, and several of his close associates are making plans to dispose of the man and make off with the millions of dollars of cash and jewels he has stashed away.
Harsh’s cut? A mere $50,000, and unaware of the higher stakes involved, boy, does he want that money. He is the greediest, meanest, short on finesse son-of-a-bitch ever to get mixed up in a scheme like this. Not even the inclusion of one Miss Muirz, the dictator’s long-time mistress and in on the plot (see the cover) can keep his mind off what he has coming to him.
There is no explicit sex in this story, only some rough-handed violence, mostly at the hands of Harsh directed toward Vera Sue. Plans such as the one the dictator’s friends have hatched up seldom go well, at least in books, and so it is the case here. Harsh is a piece of work all right. It’s hard to remember another character anything like him, and Dent brings him to life to perfection.
April 27th, 2017 at 6:46 pm
I have this. As I recall, it’s on one of my garage shelves. The opening didn’t grab me and saved it solely because of this cover. Now because of this review my interest is again piqued. Thanks.
April 27th, 2017 at 7:44 pm
Rick
Let me know how far you get the next time. I have a feeling that how well you like this book correlates highly with how long you can put up with Walter Harsh. No matter what the situation is that he gets into, it’s who he is and how he deals with it that’s the story.
April 27th, 2017 at 9:18 pm
I liked the two Chance Malloy hardcovers Dent did.
April 27th, 2017 at 10:24 pm
Both from 1946, before he was done with Doc Savage. I read both, enjoyed them, but I seem to have somehow forgotten anything about them. But I should follow up by adding that I’ve forgotten most books I read that long ago. Fifty years is a long time.
Time enough to start over, almost.
April 28th, 2017 at 12:56 pm
I really like and admire Lester Dent. Like him because he’s so damn good and admire him because he never stopped trying to improve as a writer. I would have enjoyed knowing the guy. I’m presently treating myself to one of his early Doc Savage yarns and you can see why he died unfulfilled. “The King Maker” is delightful and engaging juvenile hokum but far from what he was capable of in the pages of Black Mask and Argosy or in most of his own stand alones, of which “Honey in His Mouth” is a superior example.
April 28th, 2017 at 1:18 pm
“…delightful and engaging juvenile hokum…”
That’s a great way to sum up the Doc Savage novels. Back when I was in my mid to late 20s, when the Doc Savage paperbacks started to come out, I was still juvenile enough to enjoy them, hokum or not.
I do wish he’d had the time to do more stories for BLACK MASK, though. The ones he did do are classics.
April 29th, 2017 at 3:13 pm
Remember the Lester Dent formula for pulp writing?
http://www.paper-dragon.com/1939/dent.html
I have never been a big fan of Doc Savage because of the supporting cast (I like The Avenger and Ernst more modern supporting characters). I do have Altus Press releases of THE WEIRD ADVENTURES OF THE BLOND ADDER and THE EXPLOITS OF LYNN LASH AND FOSTER FADE in my waiting to be read pile.
April 29th, 2017 at 3:36 pm
Surprisingly enough, I hadn’t seen a copy of Dent’s storytelling formula before. Thanks for the link.
I don’t think it applies to novels, not directly, that is, but anyone who has the 6000-word formula down pat ought to be able to use the underlying concepts rather easily for longer works, too.
And yes, I agree, Doc’s assistants on his various adventures can wear out their welcome very quickly.