Sat 12 Oct 2019
Stories I’m Reading, Selected by Dan Stumpf: JOHN COLLIER “Evening Primrose”
Posted by Steve under Science Fiction & Fantasy , Stories I'm Reading[17] Comments
JOHN COLLIER “Evening Primrose.” Short story. First published in 1940. Collected in Presenting Moonshine (Viking Press, 1941) and more famously in Fancies and Goodnights (Doubleday, 1951; Bantam 1953). Reprnted many times. Adapted as both radio (three times on Escape, CBS) and television plays , the latter a musical by Stephen Sondheim (ABC Stage 67, November 1966).
I read this again last night for the first time since High School and delighted in it on several levels.
First, Collier’s prose, rich in lines like, “I felt like a wandering thought in the dreaming brain of a chorus girl down on her luck.” and “Their laughter was like the stridulation of the ghosts of grasshoppers.”
All in service of Collier’s dark whimsy as starving poet Charles Snell takes up residence in a stately old Department Store of Byzantine aspect (“Silks and velvets glimmered like ghosts, a hundred pantie-clad models offered simpers and embraces to the desert air.”) only to find it already haunted by the Living. Or the nearly-living, once-humans like he, who permeated themselves into the store years and ages ago, and gradually lost touch with their own humanity.
The one exception is Ella, a foundling adopted by the reigning Grande Dame of this society and used as a servant. Still human and in her teens, she has fallen in love with the Night Watchman, much to the chagrin of our poet-narrator. And when discovered, her love raises the venomous ire of the nearly-living, who summon The Dark Men, setting up a conflict that pits our narrator and the Night Watchman against…
It’s a short tale, perhaps a dozen pages, but Collier packs a whole sub-world into it, reawakens the spirit of those grandiose old emporiums (for those who remember them) and makes it real, even as he sketches out characters who – well, “come alive” doesn’t really fit here, so I’ll just say they become convincingly inhuman under his skillful pen.
Even better, Collier touches on the alienation common to fantasy readers, evokes it, embraces it and rejects it without wasting a single comma. I remember being profoundly moved as a teenager by Evening Primrose’s Truth. As an adult I was just as moved by its Beauty.
October 12th, 2019 at 7:22 pm
FANCIES & GOODNIGHTS is one of two books that if “spooked me” isn’t quite the right phrase, then “got under my skin” so badly that I couldn’t fall asleep at night after reading it.
I don’t remember if it was one particular story, or (more likely) the cumulative effect of reading one after the other, but I still get chills whenever I come across a copy of the Bantam paperback.
October 12th, 2019 at 10:42 pm
The anthology is one of the ur collections of stories that marked an era that produced some of the finest short fiction in that field (Dahl, Bradbury, Beaumont, Kersh …). Collier in particular seemed to touch a special nerve.
This one always seemed to me akin to books like Christopher Fowler’s ROOFWORLD and Neil Gaiman NEVERWHEN, of worlds parallel to ours and not actually of them just beyond the nearest shadow or glimpse in the mirror.
October 13th, 2019 at 8:24 am
As Dan noted, Stephen Sondheim did a musical adaptation of this one, which appeared on ABC Stage 67 on November 16, 1966
October 13th, 2019 at 8:26 am
(sorry, got cut off halfway)…
…according to Wikipedia. It starred Tony Perkins and Charmian Carr, fresh off her turn as Liesl in The Sound of Music, as Charles and Ella. A year later Carr married a dentist and left show business.
October 13th, 2019 at 10:57 am
Thanks for the additional information, Jeff. “Evening Primrose” is an unusual choice to base a TV musical on, I’d have thought, but it’s true. It turns out that a copy of the TV production has been found and it’s now available on DVD, along with 80 minutes of bonus material and a 28 page booklet as well. That’s what Sondheim’s name on it will do. I think I remember seeing that the show was telecast in color, but the only copy uncovered so far is in black and white.
Now, if someone could find where the story was first published, I’d be grateful. Strangely enough, that’s something that’s eluded so far. I may have just not seen it when I went looking. All that’s generally given is the date, 1940.
October 13th, 2019 at 6:02 pm
Steve,
As circumstance will have it, I’m listening
To XM Radio just now this Saturday night at 7 pm and what just came on is the version of said story on ESCAPE. I’ve heard this many times over the years, but is is an eerie story to say the least. I’ll enjoy it again right now.
October 13th, 2019 at 6:28 pm
Ha! Coincidence rears its beautiful head once again!!
October 13th, 2019 at 11:40 pm
I didn’t read EVENING PRIMROSE until well into my adult years, and it still unnerved me. I can only imagine what it would have been like to encounter it much earlier.
October 15th, 2019 at 9:57 pm
Just to keep this thread going a little further, if there’s anyone out there who
REALLY wants to get creeped out from an OTR show, try QUIET, PLEASE version of “The Thing On the Fourble Board”. It’s incredibly
well done.
October 18th, 2019 at 3:53 pm
Steve–one of the ongoing mysteries of the FictionMags list. We might have to go to the Collier papers, which are detailed on line, in person, since it has not been cited anywhere any of us have seen, the 1940 original publication site of the short story.
I thought the YouTube copy I watched a decade ago was in color, but I suspect not. The story isn’t So Very Odd for Sondheim to be drawn to, nor for the kind of programming ABC’s drama anthologies leaned toward.
October 18th, 2019 at 7:42 pm
Thanks, Todd. It’s good to learn that I’m not the only one who’s run into a dead end.
October 19th, 2019 at 2:11 pm
Amusingly enough, if it wasn’t first published in something Collier wasn’t proud of, it’s possible it was first read on the radio and copyrighted for that.
I certainly first read it as a child, probably in one of Robert Arthur’s “Hitchcock” anthologies or something very similar.
And QUIET PLEASE and Wyllis Cooper’s other radio horror and related work set a very high bar, indeed.
October 19th, 2019 at 2:13 pm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QNXXEeQm-8M
October 19th, 2019 at 2:15 pm
That’s Charmian Carr singing one of the key songs from “Evening Primrose” at comment 13.
October 19th, 2019 at 2:21 pm
Thanks for the link, Todd!
October 19th, 2019 at 2:26 pm
Todd, replying to your comment #12, “Evening Primrose” was included in Alfred Hitchcock Presents: 12 Stories for Late at Night (Random House, 1961; Dell, 1962). That may have been where you read it.
October 27th, 2020 at 1:27 pm
I like the story, but I found it impossible to suspend disbelief. Where did these people get their food? How did they hide during store hours?(could they stand there motionless for 12 hours?) And how probable is it that Ella’s mother would have left without her?