Tue 24 Sep 2024
Stories I’m Reading: CARROLL JOHN DALY “The False Burton Comes.”
Posted by Steve under Pulp Fiction , Stories I'm Reading[4] Comments
CARROLL JOHN DALY “The False Burton Comes.” First published in Black Mask, December 1922. Reprinted in The Hard-Boiled Detective, edited by Herbert Ruhm (Vintage Books, paperback original; 1st printing, January 1977).
While I could easily be wrong about this, the protagonist in “The False Burton Comes” is, never named. For most of the story’s length he’s been hired by the real Burton Comes to impersonate him for a summer’s season. Why? The real Burton Comes, a socialite of sorts, has gotten into trouble, and he believes that someone wants him dead. He is also sure they mean it.
And he is, of course, absolutely right. The false Burton Combs finds life could be easy, living a life of wealthy comfort, flirting with women all around (and two in particular), far away from his usual status of thinking himself as being somewhere between a crook and a cop. He’s a rough and tough fellow, a confidence man with lots of crude – but effective – confidence.
He slips up, though, and when the bad guys come, he is both ready and not ready for them. They catch him looking the wrong way at the time, and this is where the story really comes in. I don’t think he asks the right questions when he should have, even through the beginning of a trial that eventually catches up with him.
“The False Burton Comes” is considered by many critics to be the first hard-boiled story to appear in the famed pages of Black Mask magazine. I claim no expertise in that regard, but I do have to say that Carroll John Daly is a better writer that some other experts say of him. He’s no Hammett or Raymond Chandler, of course. No one is. But the story moves along like a railroad train barely under control, and with a language and dialogue that’s, yes, hard-boiled, too. Even if the ending might be a little soppy, all in all, it’s a fine piece of work.
September 24th, 2024 at 7:40 am
I liked it so much I immediately afterward read Snarl of the Beast. Which was not nearly as good.
September 24th, 2024 at 7:52 am
I also thought this was a very good story, but it didn’t turn me into a Daly fan by any stretch. He just never honed his skills as a writer.
September 26th, 2024 at 1:10 pm
I was hoping for a larger consensus, but two out of two will have to do, for now: “Budd” is a good story, but as time went on, Daly’s work turned into more of a hackwork sludge.
I don’t know as I agree with that assessment, but as I haven’t read all that much of Daly’s later work, I won’t disagree either.
September 27th, 2024 at 11:02 pm
It is a good Daly story. His problem wasn’t he was bad or incapable just he wrote fast and repeated himself a great deal and wasn’t terribly original (ironic for the creator of a genre), but he got there first and there is no doubt he could keep a narrative moving.
I’ve variously seen this story attributed as a Race Williams and Three Gun Terry Mack story (it reads more like the latter Mack being more gunman than private detective), but usually assumed it was an anonymous generic Daly protagonist.
It’s a good story, and Daly’s great contribution to the genre was his talent for creating instant cliches that became genre tropes. That and narrative drive were his great strengths. No one can say a Daly story or novel drags, indeed sometimes you wish it would slow down for a little and develop a bit of character.