Sat 31 May 2025
Stories I’m Reading: EDWARD D. HOCH “The Theft of the Toy Mouse.”
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EDWARD D. HOCH “The Theft of the Toy Mouse.” Nick Velvet #3. First published in Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine, June 1968. Collected in The Thefts of Nick Velvet (Mysterious Press, 1978).
Of the several series characters created by Ed Hoch over his long writing career, I think Nick Velvet, professional thief, is my favorite. Not only is he always hired to steal something outrageous (a complete baseball team, the water from a swimming pool), with all the intricate care that’s required, but he almost always endeavors to learn why anyone would hire him to steal that particular item.
In this story, which falls early in his early days in his unique line work, he is given $20,000 to steal a toy mouse which, when wound up, runs in circles. It is the focus of a modern film being shot in France, just outside of Paris, a setting which certainly boosts the story’s sense of place. (He does manage to convince his girl friend Gloria to stay home.)
The story rambles comfortably along and is a lot of fun to read. Unfortunately the location of toy mouse is in a building which has been built (by Hoch) to make it, on reflection, an easy task to steal. And the reason behind the caper is rather mundane. But not, of course while, the story is rambling on.
Overall, the tale is a bit of a letdown. Being “lot of fun to read” does manage to make up for a good portion of that, though.
May 31st, 2025 at 9:32 pm
Nick Velvet and Hoch are a team I was always happy to spend time with even in lesser mode.
June 1st, 2025 at 5:36 am
Who knew there were so many worthless things in the world? Hoch and Velvet managed to find more than 85 of them over Velvet’s 42-year career. Clever, unique, and captivating stories.
June 1st, 2025 at 10:46 am
Although Nick Velvet lasted 42 years, I’m partial to some of Hoch’s other characters. But, I admire Hoch’s ability to write 85 stories about Velvet’s clever thefts. Sure, there are some reaches…but I’m always willing to cut Hoch some slack.