Thu 10 Jul 2025
Fantasy Stories I’m Reading: RAY BRADBURY “Gotcha!”
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RAY BRADBURY “Gotcha!” First published in Redbook, August 1978. Collected in The Stories of Ray Bradbury (Knopf, 1980). Reprinted in The Year’s Finest Fantasy Volume 2, edited by Terry Carr (Berkley, 1979) and A Century of Horror 1970-1979, edited by David Drake & Martin H. Greenberg (MJF Books, 1996). TV Adaptation: Ray Bradbury Theater, February 20, 1988 (Season 2, Number 4). [See comment #15.]
There are authors whose work you can easily recognize – or even more easily, make a pretty good guess – by reading only the first paragraph or two, even if it’s a game you’re playing and it’s hidden from you. Case in point:
Well, what do you think?
On the particular night that this story takes place, the lady suggests they play a game. In bed. One called Gotcha, she says. He hesitates but then he agrees, That’s when things get scary. Very very scary.
“How do you like it so far?”
“I…”
“Don’t speak,” she whispered.
It gets scarier. You may want to leave the light on tonight when you go to bed, whether alone or with someone else. The ending is not quite as effective as what has come before, but it’s good enough:
“No.”
He did not want to know that part of himself.
Tears sprang to his eyes.
“Oh, no,” he said.
July 11th, 2025 at 7:48 am
Ray Bradbury wrote a number of classics including Fahrenheit 451. What a long and successful career!
July 11th, 2025 at 1:28 pm
I most certainly agree, although almost all of the Bradbury stories I’ve ever read came while I was in my teens. This would have been in the 50s and early 60s. I read everything by him I could get my hands on, and then … I stopped. This is the first work by him I can remember reading in the past 60 years.
Whether it was him or me, I cannot tell you. I’d have to investigate his later work a lot more than I have. I enjoyed this one though, that much I can tell you. FWIW.
July 11th, 2025 at 12:24 pm
My major problem with this story, aside from agreeing the ending is a bit of a letdown, is the packaging of it (not by REDBOOK, mind you, they’re in the clear) as fantasy, when it isn’t really at all (at least as I rememember it). Bradbury didn’t do his best work at the end of his career, AFAIC (as in “I’m concerned”)…but I suspect most readers of the Carr annual and the Drake/Greenberg antho were reasonably happy to see (I see the argument being a bit stronger for inclusion in the former). If you’re going to take a non-fantasy for one’s horror compendium, I’d say “The October Game” is the one to pick up…among several others.
July 11th, 2025 at 1:42 pm
The inclusion of the story in REDBOOK, its first appearance, surprised me, but I’m sure Bradbury was probably not at all ready to turn down the money that was probably offered him.
Personally I think it’s a horror story, but the kind of horror story that’s included in a general category of fantasy. It’s a good fit for the Carr anthology then, and maybe just a better one for the Drake/Greenberg collection. My opinion, at least.
It doesn’t seem to be considered a major part of Bradbury’s work, though, or even widely known, an observation that right now I disagree with. But as you say, there’s a lot of competition from other stories he wrote that’s working against it, all super super stuff by any standard.
July 11th, 2025 at 12:27 pm
REDBOOK even notes “8 GREAT STORIES–PLUS A RAY BRADBURY CHILLER!” RB probably didn’t take that as a slight, but just might’ve if feeling peevish!
July 11th, 2025 at 1:46 pm
A humorous thought just came to me that none of the other stories in this special fiction issue of REDBOOK was remembered by anyone for more than a month.
If that long.
(If anyone would care to check me out on this, please feel welcome. As always.)
July 11th, 2025 at 3:45 pm
Not only are the other stories not remembered, Steve, but neither are any of the eight other fiction authors in this issue — Frances Day (her only short story per FictionMags Index), Emaline Henard (only two stories, both in REDBOOK), Kathleen Spivack (two short stories, both in REDBOOK, plus nine poems, mainly in “little” magazines), Thomas Molloy (this story only), Marjorie Franco (she’s had some success, more than fifty stories published from 1967 through 1995, with 41 of them in REDBOOK; from the titles. I gather that some of them feature such characters as “Alexander”, “Genevieve”, and “Anthony Adverse”), Thomas Bontly (five satories from 1971 to 1998), Margaret A. Robinson (23 short stories — 16 in REDBOOK — and one novel from 1974 to 2004), Lisa Marie Sloan (just this story), and Anne Eliot Crompton (an additional four original stories placed in YA fantasy anthologies edited by Bruce Coville and Jane Yolen).
I don’t mean to disparage any of these authors or their talents. They may well have had many well-deserved successes that are not reflected in the FictionMags Index. But, frankly, i had never heard of any of them. which kind of gets to your point.
July 12th, 2025 at 11:57 am
Aargh. My apologies, Jerry. I didn’t see you comment until now. Yesterday was a busier day than usual. I hope you’ll forgive me.
But yes, you’ve confirmed what I only suspected until now. The rest of the fiction in this issue was written by REDBOOK regulars, shall we say. Enjoyable enough when read back in the day, or at least let’s hope so, but soon forgotten. And for the writers themselves, what a real pleasure I’m sure they has when they saw their name in print. A well-deserved thrill to anyone who gets a story published. Absolutely! No disparagement at all.
July 11th, 2025 at 5:57 pm
Not at all surprised REDBOOK happily took the story…through most of its run, REDBOOK has been a real friend to good fiction in a way that PLAYBOY was imitating when it rolled out. Donald Westlake’s CALL ME A CAB famously (in our circles) first ran there, and for decades, only there. A tour through O. HENRY, BEST AMERICAN SHORT STORIES, and not a few fantasy volumes will show stories that saw first light in the magazine, which at various times tried to appeal to young couples (perhaps more various sorts of couples than they were ready to directly advertise, but nonetheless), rather than solely to female readers.
July 11th, 2025 at 6:03 pm
As I remember the story, it has no truly fantasticated element that requires stepping beyond consensus reality, however disturbing to the characters their game (as I recall) is at least to him. But I haven’t reread it since I first saw it in Carr’s annual when it was new, and might well have forgotten something.
July 11th, 2025 at 10:47 pm
It’s definitely fantasy, and a very dark fantasy at that. That’s according to me. I may have missed a worldly explanation for what goes on in their bed at night, so maybe I’m wrong. But Terry Carr thought so too. It’s the lead story in his Best Fantasy anthology for that year. That’s where I read the story too. I wonder how easy it would be to find a copy pf that issue of REDBOOK? I ask the question without having any idea how hard to find it might be.
ADDED LATER: I’m still thinking about this. It is possible that the events that happened that night in question happened in the man’s head, and there only. So, therefore not fantasy? Perhaps.
July 11th, 2025 at 11:56 pm
The slicks were still featuring fiction at that time and while the names were often getting more obscure the likes of Bradbury, Clarke, Silverberg, JDM, and others still made appearances and novel length fiction still got adapted and serialized.
July 12th, 2025 at 9:29 am
There are currently 3 copies of this issue of Redbook available on eBay, all in the $15.00 range.
All of the women’s magazines regularly published loads of fiction for decades. Redbook even serialized Robert Nathan’s “Portrait of Jennie” back in 1939. All those issues contained at least 9 other stories as well. The fiction has pretty much vanished completely from those magazines now.
July 12th, 2025 at 11:50 am
Thanks, Ken. You did the job I just didn’t have time to do yesterday. Searching on eBay is the obvious first choice to look, though. It’s good to know that all Ray Bradbury completists, say, have a place to go to.
And you’re certainly right about the fiction that used be included in abundance in these old “woman’s” magazine in the past that sure doesn’t exist any more.
July 12th, 2025 at 12:11 pm
I had overlooked the fact that this appeared in Redbook before Carr’s annual—shame on me! You’ve enabled me to correct an error in my work in progress about the screen careers of Bradbury et alia, for which I thank you.
Ray did a very curious thing when he adapted the story under that title for his eponymous cable TV series in 1988. He grafted it onto his “The Laurel and Hardy Love Affair” (Playboy, December 1987), using that to portray the early, idyllic portion of their relationship before, in “Gotcha!,” things turned very dark indeed.
July 12th, 2025 at 1:43 pm
More about the story that I did not know. Thanks, Matthew!
While doing some researching on the TV version on my own, I found the following online discussion very interesting:
https://raybradburyboard.com/eve/forums/a/tpc/f/3791083901/m/5811048351?r=1201069351
July 12th, 2025 at 8:38 pm
If you just want to read the story as it appeared in the magazine Internet Archive has downloadable copies of magazines of the era in many cases reprinting many good stories if you care to look.
July 16th, 2025 at 11:49 pm
My point earlier was and remains that REDBOOK fiction averaged better than that in nearly every other woman’s magazine, and they kept at it for longer…even though WOMAN’S WORLD with its CF and romance fiction vignettes might be coming close to matching duration, but not quality so much. REDBOOK’s current online only publishers just saw to it that one can’t read the back issues on the Internet Archive any longer without medically official eye trouble, alas.
July 16th, 2025 at 11:51 pm
In re Comment 11, that’s how I’ve always read it.
July 17th, 2025 at 12:53 pm
I don’t quite read it that way, but it’s a solid interpretation, that’s for sure.