Sat 10 Sep 2022
Pulp Stories I’m Reading: BRUNO FISCHER “Deadlier Than the Male” (Then and Now.)
Posted by Steve under Pulp Fiction , Stories I'm Reading[6] Comments
Back then: January 1968. I said:
BRUNO FISCHER “Deadlier Than the Male.†Novelette. Published in Dime Mystery Magazine, May 1945. A soldier’s buddy comes home from the war to check on his friend’s wife, who seems to have changed. Murder welcomes him at the door. Fairly obvious ending. (2)
Now:
While on furlough and with his buddy is still off fighting the war in Germany, Sgt. Peter Cole visits his friend’s wife, whose letters to him have become fewer and fewer, and what’s worse, less passionate. The woman who greets him is beautiful and outwardly caring, but Cole senses something is off.
Hearing a small noise in the bedroom and his suspicions aroused, he forcibly decides to check it out. What he does not expect is to find is a dead man in a closet. Knocked unconscious almost immediately, the next thing he knows is being woken up by a cop in the alley behind his friend’s wife’s apartment. Both of them head back in, but of course the body is missing.
It’s a good opening, and Fischer always had a good way with words, so this one starts out with a lot of promise. But sometimes the openings of stories by even good authors fail to fulfill early expectations, and such is the case here. What follows is a decent enough detective story, but it runs a little too complicated, and what Fischer failed to do is make it interesting as well. I wish I could say otherwise, but there were no sparks in this one for me.
Rating: 2 stars.
September 11th, 2022 at 12:17 pm
A pity, but Fischer made up for it elsewhere. Maybe that this one was a fizzle is why it ended up in DIME MYSTERY.
September 11th, 2022 at 5:13 pm
I didn’t mean to suggest I considered this one a total fizzle. (2) stars is only half a star less than average (2.5 out of five). There are lots of pulp stories I’d probably rate as 1’s, or even, shudder, 0’s.
What struck me most was how close my opinion now was to what my thoughts were back in 1968, at least with this tale. I’ll continue working my way through this issue, story by story, and see if that fact continues to hold up.
September 11th, 2022 at 11:33 pm
Prolific as Fischer was, I wonder if he let one slide a little here and there. This isn’t far off from the era when he made an upward move into hard covers, and he may have let some lesser work slide a little with an eye to a new market
September 13th, 2022 at 12:33 pm
The opening seems very good. Sad that the rest of the story didn’t live up to the promise of the opening.
September 15th, 2022 at 9:20 pm
In fairness to Fischer opening well and fizzling out was the standard at DIME MYSTERY considering the kind of stories they most often published. They were all about grabbing the reader and much less about delivering especially as so many of the earlier stories opened with the strong suggestion of the supernatural and had to explain everything more or less in realistic terms by the stories end.
The editors had to be looking for strong openings and not overly concerned if everything tied up neatly or powerfully.
September 15th, 2022 at 9:44 pm
Thank you, David. I have been thinking how I might explain why “the fizzle” didn’t bother me as much as some of the other commenters who have picked up on it. The more spectacular the opening events in these old pulp stories happened to be, the harder it was for the author to come up with an equally spectacular ending. I more or less take it for granted!